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diff --git a/docs/release/installation.introduction.rst b/docs/release/installation.introduction.rst index c45866684..cdf1479b2 100644 --- a/docs/release/installation.introduction.rst +++ b/docs/release/installation.introduction.rst @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ Installation Abstract ======== -This document provides an overview of the installation of the Euphrates release of OPNFV. +This an overview document for the installation of the Euphrates release of OPNFV. The Euphrates release can be installed making use of any of the installer projects in OPNFV: Apex, Compass4Nfv, Daisy4NFV, Fuel or JOID. Each installer provides the ability to install a common OPNFV @@ -105,9 +105,9 @@ The instructions for each toolchain can be found in these links: OPNFV Test Frameworks ===================== -If you have elected to install the OPNFV platform using the deployment toolchain provided by OPNFV +If you have elected to install the OPNFV platform using the deployment toolchain provided by OPNFV, your system will have been validated once the installation is completed. -The basic deployment validation only addresses a small part of capabilities provided in +The basic deployment validation only addresses a small part of capabilities in the platform and you may want to execute more exhaustive tests. Some investigation will be required to select the right test suites to run on your platform. diff --git a/docs/release/release-notes.rst b/docs/release/release-notes.rst index 8039c53bd..9e6e5c301 100644 --- a/docs/release/release-notes.rst +++ b/docs/release/release-notes.rst @@ -7,8 +7,8 @@ Release Notes ============= -Release notes as provided by the OPNFV participating projects are captured in this section. -These include details of software versions used, known limitations and outstanding trouble +Release notes as provided by participating projects in OPNFV are captured in this section. +These include details of software versions used, known limitations, and outstanding trouble reports. Project release notes: diff --git a/docs/release/userguide.introduction.rst b/docs/release/userguide.introduction.rst index b7f42521b..ef48e590c 100644 --- a/docs/release/userguide.introduction.rst +++ b/docs/release/userguide.introduction.rst @@ -14,11 +14,11 @@ Abstract OPNFV is a collaborative project aimed at providing a variety of virtualisation deployments intended to host applications serving the networking and carrier industries. This document provides guidance and instructions for using platform -features designed to support these applications, made available in the OPNFV +features designed to support these applications that are made available in the OPNFV Euphrates release. This document is not intended to replace or replicate documentation from other -upstream open source projects such as KVM, OpenDaylight, or OpenStack, but to highlight the +upstream open source projects such as KVM, OpenDaylight, OpenStack, etc., but to highlight the features and capabilities delivered through the OPNFV project. @@ -28,14 +28,14 @@ Introduction OPNFV provides a suite of scenarios, infrastructure deployment options, which are able to be installed to host virtualised network functions (VNFs). This document intends to help users of the platform leverage the features and -capabilities delivered by the OPNFV project. +capabilities delivered by OPNFV. OPNFVs' Continuous Integration builds, deploys and tests combinations of virtual infrastructure components in what are defined as scenarios. A scenario may include components such as KVM, OpenDaylight, OpenStack, OVS, etc., where each scenario will include different source components or configurations. Scenarios are designed to enable specific features and capabilities in the platform that -can be leveraged by the OPNFV User community. +can be leveraged by the OPNFV user community. Feature Overview @@ -44,15 +44,15 @@ Feature Overview The following links outline the feature deliverables from participating OPNFV projects in the Euphrates release. Each of the participating projects provides detailed descriptions about the delivered features including use cases, -implementation and configuration specifics. +implementation, and configuration specifics. The following Configuration Guides and User Guides assume that the reader already has some -information about a given project's specifics and deliverables. These Guides +knowledge about a given project's specifics and deliverables. These Guides are intended to be used following the installation with an OPNFV installer to allow users to deploy and implement feature delivered by OPNFV. If you are unsure about the specifics of a given project, please refer to the -OPNFV wiki page at http://wiki.opnfv.org, for more details. +OPNFV wiki page at http://wiki.opnfv.org for more details. Feature Configuration Guides |