From c83a5fc57f7bde4c6437c73b4eb9e4adce080ace Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: meimei Date: Fri, 24 Mar 2017 17:22:16 +0800 Subject: [compass-docs] correct some minor mistake Change-Id: I0e065552cbcaeffde83daeac9d1c27445f6cfcbb Signed-off-by: meimei (cherry picked from commit 751fe977da4661d7c99733afc7d0b1d060da198d) --- docs/release/installation/bmdeploy.rst | 2 +- docs/release/installation/expansion.rst | 5 ++--- docs/release/installation/offline-deploy.rst | 4 ++-- 3 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/release/installation/bmdeploy.rst b/docs/release/installation/bmdeploy.rst index 43f08370..7bf40714 100644 --- a/docs/release/installation/bmdeploy.rst +++ b/docs/release/installation/bmdeploy.rst @@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ E.g. Openstack only deployment roles setting - compute NOTE: -THE 'ha' role MUST BE SELECT WITH CONTROLLERS, EVEN THERE IS ONLY ONE CONTROLLER NODE. +THE 'ha' role MUST BE SELECTED WITH CONTROLLERS, EVEN THERE IS ONLY ONE CONTROLLER NODE. E.g. Openstack and ceph deployment roles setting diff --git a/docs/release/installation/expansion.rst b/docs/release/installation/expansion.rst index df0edb2d..fddeed21 100644 --- a/docs/release/installation/expansion.rst +++ b/docs/release/installation/expansion.rst @@ -12,11 +12,10 @@ The below file is the inventory template of deployment nodes: "./deploy/conf/hardware_environment/huawei-pod1/network.yml" -You can edit the network.yml which you had edited before the first deployment. +You need to edit the network.yml which you had edited the first deployment. NOTE: -External subnet's ip_range should be changed as the first 6 IPs are already taken -by the first deployment. +External subnet's ip_range should exclude the IPs those have already been used. Edit DHA File ------------- diff --git a/docs/release/installation/offline-deploy.rst b/docs/release/installation/offline-deploy.rst index 68c78a0b..c854f87d 100644 --- a/docs/release/installation/offline-deploy.rst +++ b/docs/release/installation/offline-deploy.rst @@ -3,9 +3,9 @@ Offline Deploy ============== -Compass4nfv uses offline approuch to deploy cluster and support complete offline +Compass4nfv uses offline approach to deploy cluster and support complete offline deployment on a jumphost without access internet. Here is the offline deployment -instuction: +instruction: Preparation for offline deploy ------------------------------ -- cgit 1.2.3-korg